Thursday, 1 March 2012
Project Brief
Tuesday, 1 March 2011
The Client
This is the sheet that we were given as a group which explained who our client was for this project:
We are producing the newspaper for Jenny Grahame who is at the english and media centre.
Prezi - Project plan
Sunday, 9 May 2010
Feedback from Jenny Grahame (The client)
Dear Alexander and team
I just wanted (very belatedly) to congratulate you on a magnficent
achievement in getting the newspaper together to deadline and in such a
clear and attractive format. It looks very good, and as you probably
already know, schools are gagging for it - not an easy market to break into,
so well done to all of you. Am currently rounding up a long list of orders -
given the declining state of the newspaper industry, you appear to be
bucking a trend, which is rather brilliant!
Best wishes, and very good luck to you all
Jenny
I am very pleased with the feedback from Jenny as it clearly shows her raw appreciation for what we have done and also the sense that she feels as if there will be a future for the newspaper (when she speaks about the newspaper industry) which of course is a very good thing as it means that we may be able to carry on producing / printing the newspaper in order to gain a higher profit purhaps. Overall Jenny's feedback is very positive and I am pleased with the outcome of the newspaper evenmore so after viewing / reading through the feedback from our client (Jenny Grahame)
Tuesday, 4 May 2010
Mikes blog post
Feedback on newspaper
We have recieved some feedback from the people who have purchased copies of our mediame newspaper, shown below is the feedback we recieved.
“We've just put the undergroundmap on the wall and are fighting about who is on the coolest line(that's teachers not students by the way!) Initial reaction is that we can't wait to use it in the classroom -could be a few more bigger images in there...We'll use it with students next week (weds) and email you some morefeedback”
Mary Berrisford, Islington
“MediaMe looks great. Works really well with the colour, etc. Megaachievement.”
Jenny Grahame
"Good on section 1"
"Methodical systematic and detailed"
"Very concise to the point"
"Very clearly expressed"
"Wordsearch page blurry"
"Wikipedia game Already played by lots of class good -article- less obviously useful than others"
"Useful - better than a textbook"
"Great format"
"Tube map great"
"Format handy"
"Teacher prefers online to print -students like print far more"
"Layout really good"
"Is point about TV not needing a licence true?"
All above points / quotes From Reigate College
Accounts - financial
Shown below are the costs for this project (MediaMe newspaper)
Outgoing costs (Money out) :
Cost for 500 copies from newspaper club (printers) : £500 including VAT
Postage cost for first three orders : £11.40
Income (Money in)
Junction advert : £350
Lincoln university advert : £100
OCR advert : £100
Guernsey Grammar purchased -> 20 copies : £10
Reigate purchased -> 120 copies : £60
Islington purchased -> 40 copies : £20
Netherhall purchased -> 30 copies : £15
free samples and copies for media group members & moderator : 50 Copies
The total amount that we have received so far from selling copies and getting adverts is : £655
Which means we currently have a profit of: £145 (Aprox)
Wednesday, 21 April 2010
Project Evaluation
- Time management skills have increased
- Orgainisation skils have increased
- Comunication skills have increased
- I have learnt to create activities for the group which has bosted my moral and persona sense of achievement
- I have learnt about the structure of a newspaper company and also how to work more professionaly within a workin enviroment
- I have also learnt how to get a product finsiehd on time for a client
- Working productivly as part of a team
- Organisational skills have incresed
- Time management / organisation skills
- Working productivly within a team
- Working to a clients brief and producing a product on time and to their standards
- Creative skills have increased such as photo and video editing
Newspaper - Finished Product
- Revision tips
- Useful facts and figures for people to use within their exam
- Relevant information
- Information displayed within diagrams / images
On the other hand there were some significant down sides to our finsihed nespaper, things such as:
- Some articles are lacking images
- Articles are not always consistant in style
- Font style is not always the same
- Some articles do not relate to the exam
- Not enough specific reference to the exam itself
- Some articles are lacking facts and figures
Overall the newspaper is in mny opinion very good considering the time we had to work on it, I strongly believe that if we had more time then we could of amended the above things which were wrong with the newspaper but overall I believe considering the time which we had for this project we done very well indeed but of course there were problems with the finished product which I belive would of been apparent even if we did have more time.
Here is a video I created which hsows our finished newspaper / product:
Thursday, 1 April 2010
Feedback from Jenny Grahame
Shown below are some photos I took of the print outs of Jennys feedback which I recieved from Alex:
Here is the 1st set of feedback which we recieved
Shown below is the 2nd batch of feedback which we recieved from Jenny:
Wednesday, 31 March 2010
Flat Plan
Here is a photo which I took of the style sheet (with the articles) on the board:
Shown below is a list of the page layout within the flat plan itself
page 1 - Front cover
page 2 - Question 1A of the exam (Mike)
page 3 - Time to turn off TV for good? (Tara & Matt)
page 4 - Is Wikipedia an online blessing? (James)
page 5 - Lincoln advert and activities (Alex & Sam)
page 6 - Media tube map (double page spread) (Tim)
page 7 - Media Tube map (double page spread) (Tim)
page 8 - Lincoln advert and activities (Alex & Sam)
page 9 - Wikipedia world tour (activity) (Tim)
page 10 - Has Twitter changed communication? (Alie)
page 11 - Zeitgeist forecast (Hayden)
page 12 - (back page) Online gaming communities (Ash & Dave)
Here is what people needed to change within their articles and what needs doing collectivily with some points:
- Change footer and headers to look the same
- In the footer there MUST be exam tips (1 sentance) from Mikes article (So mikes article will now be spread throughout the newspaper)
- In the header there will be bits from Sams practitioner articles
- Question 1a needs to have question 1b added to it
- Repetition of colour needs changing needs different eye catching colours
- MUST be same style (ALL articles)
- OCR / JUNCTION / LINCOLN adverts need putting into place (style sheet / articles)
- Underground map needs changing (Writting / structure)
- The offical london underground information / logos need taking out (copy right infringment)
- Ash and daves article needs putting into one full article and needs re-writting
- The front page at the moment looks un profesional and needs changing asap! the paragraph / editorial needs to take up most of the front page and descibe in DETAIL what the newspaper is about and who we are etc
- The people involved with the project neede to be creditied on front page (e.g Jenny Grahame, newspaper club etc)
- ALL articles must have at least 2 pull out quotes
Overall the main issue is that there are not enough pages as after cutting down articles we now have 11 so of course there will have to ba another page added (1 idea was to have an activities page) which I believe will be the best thing to do at this late stage of production as it is quick and easy to complete within a short space of time
Final flat plan session (Constructing newspaper)
Here is a video / slideshow I created which shows the session today (in photos) and also has an audio recording from the session
( keep in mind that some bits of audio had to be cut out due to sound quality )
Tuesday, 30 March 2010
Feedback on Article
Plan - Completion of articles
Finalizing images / Articles
Monday, 29 March 2010
Flat planning / Completing articles
Myself and Tara have discussed the flat plan draft with Pete and have changed it (due to people changing the length of their articles) Pete pointed out to us that we should keep in mind that we will not be able to complete a full flat plan because people are still working on their articles and are still cutting them down, another reason why this flat plan is only a draft, is due to the fact that the articles will be sent to Jenny for further feedback so therefore she may mention to people that they may have to be cut down further, which in turn means that the flat plan may need re organizing.
Here is the finished draft Flat plan for the newspaper:
I have also given some feedback to loz today for his article in order for him to get it completed and sent to Jenny in time, I found that the main thing for him to change was a few spelling mistakes etc but overall it was very good!
Here is a photo of Loz's article (with my written feedback on it):
Feedback on blog (Mike)
Schedule for week (29th - 1st April)
Friday, 26 March 2010
Style Sheet - Rough / Draft
Flat planning session / completion of articles
Copy right free images
Thursday, 25 March 2010
Things to be completed
Change of plan / schedule
Minutes from meeting (Style sheet)
James ( Blue team member )
- Hayden suggested that we should only have ONE text wrapping image within the articles and it must be a BIG sized image
- James stated that the titles should be BIG and BOLD compared with the rest of the font within the article
- I suggested that 3 collums within each article is a good amount to have as 4+ collums creates to much on one page and makes it look crowded
- Hayden suggested that box outs should be shown in the bottom right of the articles
- We all thought that 12pt font would be the best to use for the main content within the articles
- James said that the best idea would maybe to centre the title on the articles
- I suggested that it would be a good idea to make full use of the colour printers at the newspaper club and include as much colour as possible within our articles
- We all suggested that the introduction should be in bold and set at a slightly bigger font than the other font within the article such as (14pt)
- James said that there should be NO gaps with the articles as it looks as if it is 'unfinished'
Wednesday, 24 March 2010
Style Sheet - draft / ideas
Tuesday, 23 March 2010
Interviews with target audience
Shown below is the video from the audio recordings that I gained in todays interviews, and also including the photos that myself and Tara took during the time that the interviews were taking place
Interview video - Extended project from cmdiploma on Vimeo.
This is the video made up of the recordings and photos taken from the interview session on the 23rd March for the extended project (Newspaper - A2 Exam)
Video produced by: Kirk
Interviewers: Kirk & Tara
Audio recorded by: Kirk
Photos taken by: Kirk & Tara
Thanks to every one involved with the interviews!
Interviews with target audience
Tom
1) What social networking websites do you currently use if any?
Have you ever deleted your social profile online and why?
I actually don’t use any, I cant be bothered with continuous updating
2) Do you use the internet to watch TV programs as opposed to physically watching
TV? For example BBC I-player, 4OD etc …
Yeah TV programmes, I use streaming sites such as TV dome occasionally use BBC-I player, I don’t really use 4 OD, TV dome is better as it has all the American TV shows and also does pirate films
3) Have you ever produced a video and posted it online?
What websites have you posted your video (s) on ?
No, but I have during the course, I use vimeo but only for the course, Vimeo has better quality above you tube, as you tube has a low audience
4) In what format do you view the news? For example Internet, newspaper, TV?
What format do you prefer?
I get a little up date on my computer, when I go on my computer I get a little news update with important news, I cant be bothered to buy newspapers
5) Do you download music from the internet?
What websites do you use in order to download your music?
I use lime wire
6) Are you currently using any of the following websites to upload your own
material?
- Deviant Art
- Flickr
- Youtube
- Myspace
If so then why? And how often do you upload material to the websites?
I use flicker for photos and you tube as its what we are pointed at during this course
Tom & Sven
1) What social networking websites do you currently use if any?
Have you ever deleted your social profile online and why?
Tom - Facebook, I still have myspace but don’t do any thing with it
2) Do you use the internet to watch TV programs as opposed to physically watching
TV? For example BBC I-player, 4OD etc …
Tom - Yeah I sue 4 OD
Sven - I use you tube to watch new shows and use bbc I player
3) Have you ever produced a video and posted it online?
What websites have you posted your video (s) on ?
Sven - I mainly create animation videos and stop motions then place them on you tube
Tom - Me and my friend have an account so we upload videos, he does like magic videos and stuff
4) In what format do you view the news? For example Internet, newspaper, TV?
What format do you prefer?
Tom - I watch the TV in the mornings and I get the free newspapers off the train
Sven - I watch the news on TV in the afternoons
5) Do you download music from the internet?
What websites do you use in order to download your music?
Tom - My dads got a subscription to napster so I use that sometimes and ive used lime wire before but it takes too long so I don’t use it any more and id rather own CDS
Sven - I don’t download any music
6) Are you currently using any of the following websites to upload your own
material?
- Deviant Art
- Flickr
- Youtube
- Myspace
If so then why? And how often do you upload material to the websites?
Tom - I use flicker for college and that’s about it, maybe if I was creating a project I might use deviant art and I use it because its what we have to sue during this course, I upload photos about once a week
Tilly & Lewis
1) What social networking websites do you currently use if any?
Have you ever deleted your social profile online and why?
Tilly - Facebook, I did have a myspace but I don’t use it anymore but nobody uses it and everyone has a face book so I use that
Lewis - Facebook
2) Do you use the internet to watch TV programs as opposed to physically watching
TV? For example BBC I-player, 4OD etc …
Tilly - I did use BBC - I player before I got virgin TV and also I used 4 OD I prfer watching things on TV, but sometimes catch up online
Lewis - I use online TV to catch up
3) Have you ever produced a video and posted it online?
What websites have you posted your video (s) on ?
Tilly - I use youtube to watch videos now and again, I prefer youtube than vimeo as its easier
Lewis - I watch music videos on you tube Ive made videos of me and my mates mucking about, youtube is better than vimeo as Its harder to use vimeo as we have only just been using it in our course
4) In what format do you view the news? For example Internet, newspaper, TV?
What format do you prefer?
Tilly - I watch news on TV, I don’t like reading newspapers
Lewis - I watch news on the TV
5) Do you download music from the internet?
What websites do you use in order to download your music?
Tilly - Yeah, I use limewire and I-tunes to listen and download music
Lewis - Yeah
6) Are you currently using any of the following websites to upload your own
material?
- Deviant Art
- Flickr
- Youtube
- Myspace
If so then why? And how often do you upload material to the websites?
Tilly - I use fliker every two weeks and upload photos
Lewis - I use fliker and upload photos every two weeks
Max & Yasmin
1) What social networking websites do you currently use if any?
Have you ever deleted your social profile online and why?
Max - Just face book, used to use myspace and bebo, stll somewhere on the internet but not active
Yasmin - Just face book, used to use myspace and bebo
2) Do you use the internet to watch TV programs as opposed to physically watching
TV? For example BBC I-player, 4OD etc …
Yasmin - Yeah I do I use BBC iplayer, its more convenient watching TV on the internet
Max - Ive used bbc iplayer once or twice
3) Have you ever produced a video and posted it online?
What websites have you posted your video (s) on ?
Yasmin - Ive uploaded videos on youtube in this course
Max - I use youtube and have done since the age of about 12, Vimeo is more streamlined but ill probably still use youtube Just the fact that you have to get an account and everything just on youtube its easier
4) In what format do you view the news? For example Internet, newspaper, TV?
What format do you prefer?
Max - I don’t watch the news at all but I do see pop ups now and again on line and I would check the internet if there was some major important news
Yasmin - Its usually just on in the background and when I sign into hotmail the news pops up and I look at the metro on the train
6) Are you currently using any of the following websites to upload your own
material?
- Deviant Art
- Flickr
- Youtube
- Myspace
If so then why? And how often do you upload material to the websites?
Max - Yeah ive used deviant art once or twice for an old art project and I have friends that have flicker sites but I don’t have one myself I upload material about once a month
Yasmin - I use fliker to upload photos on my own personal profile I upload material about once a month
Hannah & Emma
1) What social networking websites do you currently use if any?
Have you ever deleted your social profile online and why?
Hannah - Facebook and used to use myspace
Emma - Facebook used to use picso and bebo I never use them now as no ones on them apart from face book always on facebook
2) Do you use the internet to watch TV programs as opposed to physically watching
TV? For example BBC I-player, 4OD etc …
Hannah - Sometimes use BBC I player
Emma - I use sky plus and record programmes but I sometimes use BBC - I player I prfer watching TV as its easier
3) Have you ever produced a video and posted it online?
What websites have you posted your video (s) on ?
Emma - we put our videos from college projects online
Hannah - We put our videos from college online, like the music videos etc
4) In what format do you view the news? For example Internet, newspaper, TV?
What format do you prefer?
Hannah - I don’t really watch the news or anything really
Emma - I watch news on the TV if its on and nothing else is on, its not that important to me
5) Do you download music from the internet?
What websites do you use in order to download your music?
Hannah - I use limewire for downloading music as its free
Emma - I use I-tunes and limewire as its free I convert MP3s from youtube now and again as its free and easy to do
6) Are you currently using any of the following websites to upload your own
material?
- Deviant Art
- Flickr
- Youtube
- Myspace
If so then why? And how often do you upload material to the websites?
Emma - I use flicker to upload photos but I use face book as well but I do like flicker, I use myspace now and again
Hannah - I use flicker for college photos
Overall I believe that the feedback we recieved today was maybe not as constructive as we would of hoped for due to lack of time but it was a good range of feedback and will feed very well into peoples articles as extra information and graphs, it will also allow people to see clearly what our target audience require as far as information goes, due to their internet useage etc
House style guide
Elements such as: Font, Titles, Paragraphs, Indents, Collums, etc are all addressed within the house style guide to ensure that our newspaper is looking the same (articles must look the same) otherwise it will not look professional and will look very much like a 'slap - dash' quickly produced paper and that is what we must avoid without question, so therefore to avoid this Mike has produced this house style guide, which you can see a photo of below.
Monday, 22 March 2010
Plan for the week
Friday, 19 March 2010
Logo for newspaper
Shown below are some ideas which people came up with in todays session:
Monday, 15 March 2010
Reflection on articles
Shown below are some notes that where made on peoples articles:
- Very formal maybe to formal for the readers?
- Need to have more examples!
- MUST link to exam (That is the idea for the WHOLE paper!)
- Spelling and Grammar is an issue and needs amending
- Wording and structure of the articles need re-thinking / doing
- Where are the sources from? (website / book / film / music etc)
- Needs MORE personalisation towards the audience / readers
- Too vague needs more explicit writting and information to help other students
- Need to keep to the target audience in mind (AT ALL TIMES )
- Add facts and figures so that peple can use them within their exams
- More quotes are needed within the articles!
Overall we have discussed a list of parts / pieces that need changing within the articles
Shown below is the list of things which need amending asap:
- Address the reader as a student of our age (16 - 20 )
- Ensure that they all link directly to the exam paper / questions
- Include images / diagrams / etc (VISUALS)
- Refer to the exam criteria!
- Use the wording from the exam questions or even use the WHOLE question!
- Use facts and figures
- Suppy references to sources you have used
- Check and Change (spelling / gramma etc)
- Use footnots for referencing sources
- Make it personal to the reader and use a professional tone within your writting
- Anotate images used (EXPLAIN AND ILLUSTRATE)
- Target specific exam questions relating to your article (MIX & Match) be brief yet informative
- Infomation on its own is not enough (explain every detail and be explicit with your writting!)
Sunday, 14 March 2010
Ideas for article
I took into account what Pete, Jenny and Nick were saying that it would be good to have an interview within the newspaper somewhere so that the students can take quotes from it for their exams etc, so therefore I decided to expand apon this idea and came up with a possible layout for an interview style article.
Shown below is a photo showing the idea which I came up with:
My main idea was to have the questions from the 'interview' which would most likely be conducted over the internet due to time constraints etc. The questions would be set out as individual paragraphs, with an introduction, middle and a conclussion.
The papargraphs will be acompanied by polaroid style photographs of the person in question, I believe that this style of photo will relate to our target audience whom are students much like myself and my fellow class mates
I also thought that a simple colour scheme would work best and to not use too many colours as this would distract students from the main content, and considering that this is a revision newspaper I believe that to be distracted from the main content within the article would mean that that student would not be able to focus on the actual revision itself
Saturday, 13 March 2010
Newspaper Club (Printers)
Shown below is a video showing the printing process at the newspaper club printing press:
the most fun Ben's had all year from russelldavies on Vimeo.