In this afternoons session I have given some feedback on Matt, and Taras article about TV and the internet, I found that their article was very well written, with some very good and valuable statistics which people could easily use within their exams, there were only a few minor changes such as format of sentences and changing a few words due to repetition, but overall its a very good article and I will be happy to se it within the newspaper.
Here are some photos of me writing the feedback and also the article itself:
