Myself and Tara have discussed the flat plan draft with Pete and have changed it (due to people changing the length of their articles) Pete pointed out to us that we should keep in mind that we will not be able to complete a full flat plan because people are still working on their articles and are still cutting them down, another reason why this flat plan is only a draft, is due to the fact that the articles will be sent to Jenny for further feedback so therefore she may mention to people that they may have to be cut down further, which in turn means that the flat plan may need re organizing.
Here is the finished draft Flat plan for the newspaper:
I have also given some feedback to loz today for his article in order for him to get it completed and sent to Jenny in time, I found that the main thing for him to change was a few spelling mistakes etc but overall it was very good!
Here is a photo of Loz's article (with my written feedback on it):
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